PSAT Writing and Language Question 586: Answer and Explanation

Question: 586

The author is considering deleting the underlined portion. Should this selection be removed?

• A. Yes, because it digresses from the main idea of the sentence.
• B. Yes, because it repeats ideas already implied in the sentence.
• C. No, because it provides relevant details in support of a claim.
• D. No, because it provides a needed contrast.

Correct Answer: B

Explanation:

(B) When deciding to delete a portion, ask yourself, Is this information relevant? Then ask, Does it repeat information or feature information that can be readily inferred? Since the passage already states that the narrator knew the roles he or she would fulfill upon graduation, "we felt well-prepared for the profession we were about to enter" is a restatement of what is already known. Choice (B) is the correct answer. This portion must be deleted because it does not provide meaningful, new information.