PSAT Writing and Language Question 570: Answer and Explanation

Question: 570

The author is considering deleting the underlined portion of the sentence. Should this portion be removed?

• A. Yes, because it does not focus on the essay’s primary topic.
• B. Yes, because it unfairly disparages the protagonist of the passage.
• C. No, because it underscores the author’s thoughts about Hornsby’s lack of recognition.
• D. No, because it provides specific details in support of the following sentence.

Correct Answer: C

Explanation:

(C) Without the underlined portion, many high school readers would not recognize the fame of the musicians mentioned; thus, it provides an important distinction that again "underscores the author's thoughts about Hornsby's lack of recognition." In effect, why are Hornsby's peers so much more famous than he is?