PSAT Writing and Language Question 464: Answer and Explanation

Question: 464

Which of the following provides the best combined version of the underlined sentences?

• A. These eight films were developed into seven fantasy novels, making her world a cornerstone of young adult fiction.
• B. The seven fantasy novels developed into eight films and set monumental records in sales, establishing British author J. K. Rowling's wizarding world as a cornerstone of young adult fiction.
• C. With sales that were monumental, the development of J. K. Rowling's wizarding world became a young adult fiction cornerstone—additionally, she was a British author.
• D. As the cornerstone of young adult fiction, J. K. Rowling, a British author, created a wizarding world that had eight films and set monumental sales records.

Correct Answer: B

Explanation:

(B) Choice (A) is flawed in that it eliminates the name of J. K. Rowling, thus leading to ambiguity. Choice (D) incorrectly identifies J. K. Rowling as the "cornerstone of young adult fiction," rather than her literature. Choice (C), with its opening clause of, "With sales that were monumental," must refer to the Harry Potter series rather than the development of the series, as it does incorrectly. Choice (B), however, is perfect—it maintains all relevant information while avoiding awkward word ordering.