PSAT Writing and Language Question 458: Answer and Explanation

Question: 458

The author is considering inserting the following sentence at this point in the essay:

"Trade with Great Britain was instrumental to the jobs and fortunes of some American citizens."

Should this sentence be inserted?

• A. Yes, because it underscores the importance of an international relationship.
• B. Yes, because it explains how economic policy influenced political thinking.
• C. No, because it essentially repeats ideas already expressed in the essay.
• D. No, because it shifts the topic of the paragraph.

Correct Answer: C

Explanation:

(C) The beginning of the paragraph already mentions "those of New England who depended on trade with Great Britain." So inserting this sentence is unnecessary since it repeats an idea that has already been expressed.