PSAT Writing and Language Question 407: Answer and Explanation

Question: 407

The author is considering inserting the following sentence at this point in the essay:

"It is also similar to when somebody acts desperate in interpersonal relationships—no one wants to hang out with someone who is too intent on doing so."

Should he do so?

• A. Yes, because it continues the metaphorical discussion from the previous sentence.
• B. Yes, because it introduces a new way of framing a topic critical to the argument of the essay.
• C. No, because it repeats an idea already expressed in the previous sentence.
• D. No, because it shifts the essay's focus away from the business practices of sales professionals.

Correct Answer: C

Explanation:

(C) The sentence that comes before this already makes this point using an analogy about a salesperson whose eagerness makes him seem desperate. It is not choice (D) because the focus of the essay is not on the business practices of sales professionals. It is not choice (A) or (B) because they advocate keeping a repetitive sentence.