PSAT Writing and Language Question 291: Answer and Explanation

Question: 291

• A. NO CHANGE
• B. Becoming cruel, shortsighted, and constantly dissatisfied with real life, friends and family do not affect Emma’s well-being as she cares only about her immediate physical gratification and material possessions.
• C. Becoming cruel, shortsighted, and constantly dissatisfied with real life, Emma cares only about her immediate physical gratification and material possessions rather than the well--being of her friends and family.
• D. Caring only about her immediate physical gratification and material possessions, Emma’s friends and family become cruel, shortsighted, and constantly dissatisfied with real life.

Correct Answer: C

Explanation:

Difficulty: Hard

Getting to the Answer: The placement of a modifying phrase affects the meaning of a sentence, so make sure every phrase is placed correctly. The writer intends to use the modifying phrase "becoming cruel, shortsighted, and constantly dissatisfied with real life" to describe Emma; however, as written, the phrase describes her "friends and family." Eliminate (A). Only (C) places the modifying phrase next to "Emma," so it is correct.